Thank you for sharing your work.
You have a clear desired change, and a number of pre-conditions to it. Thats great.
It is for me a bit difficult to understand the 4 preconditions as a pathway, as I don't think that e.g. “available job opportunities” is a precondition for “women to develop vocational skills”. So, either these two are sidelined, or you need to re-formulate them to become logically connected.
You have a clear desired change, and a number of pre-conditions to it. Thats great.
It is for me a bit difficult to understand the 4 preconditions as a pathway, as I don't think that e.g. “available job opportunities” is a precondition for “women to develop vocational skills”. So, either these two are sidelined, or you need to re-formulate them to become logically connected.