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The formulation of your desired change is very clear.
When reading your precondition, you are mixing them up with activities (such as workshops, training, outreach). It would be good to see your entire pathway in order to understand your logic. --> The first precondition seems to be that you need a shift in social norms before your desired change (empowerment of youth) can happen. Strong community partnerships could be another precondition, either same level as the first or one level below it.
The formulation of your desired change is very clear.
When reading your precondition, you are mixing them up with activities (such as workshops, training, outreach). It would be good to see your entire pathway in order to understand your logic. --> The first precondition seems to be that you need a shift in social norms before your desired change (empowerment of youth) can happen. Strong community partnerships could be another precondition, either same level as the first or one level below it.